Some people think children are more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Discuss.
Learning foriegn language has become necessity to survive in this global era. Although some people opine that it is easy to learn a new language for adults, others say that age factor plays a considerable role in learning a foreign language. I believe that it is much easier for children to acquire a new language than it is for adults and particularly elderly people.
To begin with, it is a fact that children’s minds are more receptive, they instantaneously absorb knowledge of any topic. Due to their developing acquisition skills, learning a new language is a piece of cake for them. At this age their mind is free from worries and real life tensions which fosters their ability to grasp new information. For instance, a toddler is quick to pick up a language that is specifically spoken by his parents. As a result, absence of any pre knowledge leads to retain new language in them.
On the contrary, adults who are having a lot of information, job stress and family responsibilities, which distract them from the process of learning. In other words, their preoccupied mind hinders their concentration and language learning process. For example, a tired mind from a job if attending language courses in the evening cannot focus on learning effectively. Undoubtedly, there are some intelligent adults who are fast learners but such people are often a rare exception. So, younger people in turn are more active in learning things effectively.
In conclusion, I believe that the learning curve declines with age and learning a foriegn language is quite a challenging task. Young people are naturally better learners than adults or elderly people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
...eir concentration and language learning process. For example, a tired mind from a job i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06934306569 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95397095049 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56204379562 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4763206574 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222477427161 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782789473716 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532128443027 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143723918832 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444659890172 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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