Some people think children are more successful in foreign language studies than adults Discuss

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Some people think children are more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Discuss.

With the advancement in technology, support in learning another language, including foreign, is readily available for everybody. However, it is often observed that children are faster in picking up new language compared to adults.
To begin with the first point, youngsters mostly focus their time and energy in studying or sports and adults need to work to make their ends meet. As it can be seen in weekend or evening classes, most adults drop out of the curriculum or perform poorly as they are completely exhausted by their work that they do not have any strength to study.
Another factor that needs to be considered is that children are more open to new ideas than compared to adults. The youngsters are not only more eager to learn but also are very curious. This is not in the case of adults. It has been seen that with age, adults are slow learners because they tend to succumb to peer pressure or have lost the ability to ask questions and acceptance.
Also, adults have known at least minimum one language and therefore, know the basic rules of the language. They can relate better and learn the intricacies quickly. Kids, however, have not mastered even one language and learning simultaneously multiple language can make it confusing specially if they languages are similar.
In conclusion, it is easier to learn language when mindset is flexible to new things, including languages. However, there has been instances where adults have mastered not only one but many foreign languages with their hard work and interest. At the end of the day, all that matters is the interest to learn.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88970588235 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52974305286 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6657059665 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178983119344 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581609761732 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431832442554 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976409844905 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194698329759 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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