Some people think that children can learn about history by visiting museums, while others feel that there are better ways to learn about history.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although many would argue that sources other than museums are better for learning the history; however, I think that live view of our heritage tell us more than reading books or on internet. This essay will depict my thoughts on the above topic.
First and foremost, museum is a place where articles in relation to our ancestors are not only collected but displayed also. Because of these artifacts, we came to know about the usage of these in the past. As a result, a visual impression is formed in our mind for a long time. For instance, a museum in Gujarat, India,has some tools related to agriculture which describes our forefather's way of doing farming in ancient periods.Moreover, these exhibits story-telling in such a mesmerizing manner where you will get the self-reflection of yours from the past. Needless to say, all these benefits stand in a good stead.
On the contrary, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that museum visiting charges are more in comparison to alternative sources like books. Due to this, popularity of this archive are now declining. Besides, the distance sometimes becomes hurdle for the visitor to visit these galleries as their presence in every place is low. Hence, it is apparent why a plethora are against this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of museums are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks cannot be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, i think, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08429118774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91358086894 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632183908046 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1484526842 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.076923077 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134531914416 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342289202422 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416464576313 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732246222016 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306701975717 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.