Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These years, materialism is growing by leaps and bounds. Economies need globalization to evolve but the adverse effects of this cannot be ignored. I am partially agreed with the statement and this essay will depict my thoughts on the above argument.
There are many reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that traditional craft and art are depleting day by day with the inclusion of foreign products. Owing to this, the local artist are increasingly out of their jobs. As a result, the unemployment rate is increasing in the nation. For instance, in India, the artistry of pottery has hit the rocks in recent years as the Chinese products are giving hard time to them by being available at cheap price.More and more people are inclined towards these imports. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that native industry as well as market is doomed due to these importing goods.Needless to say, all these demerits stand in a bad stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some merits that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the negative aspects of this trend is that globalism has brought the improvement in the medical services of many countries. There are some pharmaceuticals which produces drugs and emergency tools that are helpful in curing certain diseases can be exported to other nations. This will not only bring money to the country but will put them on the world's map also. As an example, Ayurvedic drugs bring recognition to an underdeveloped country like India i worldwide by its curing prowess as well as no side-effects. Hence, it is apparent why many are appreciating this aspect of the trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to conclusion that the benefits of globalization are instrumental indeed.Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18269230769 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0374318687 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608974358974 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7163749269 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122353640317 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372683415389 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461486043637 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824427121365 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361948989166 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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