Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day.What is your opinion about this?
Exercise plays a key role in a healthy life. Some people are of the opinion that organizations must add an exercise slot in the office hours for their workers. In my opinion, although it would ensure employees fitness and increase productivity, but it is not feasible for certain jobs.
Having a physical activity between working hours will break the monotony of work routine of employees and rejuvenate them for rest of day. This will immensely uplift the productivity of workers and bring more revenue to companies. For example, after allocating spaces to game courts in infrastructure and offering exercise time to employees, Google has improved its outcomes in various projects. However, for certain occupations which especially involve punctuality, stopping the staff to do exercise can be annoying. For instance, postponing a critical patient surgery by a surgeon for a fitness class can risk her life.
In my view, the industries should provide healthy meal to their employees and offer memberships on fitness activities such as swimming, gymnastic, yoga programs. Healthy meals contains serval nutritions which will enhance their health and free subscription to health programs will motivate them to devote some time in exercise. Similarly, Wipro offers free annually the Gold gym subscription to workers as monthly appraisal. This keeps employee fit and there is no need to add exercise time during office hours.
In conclusion, assigning a slot for employees to exercise is impractical for some job type but companies should offer healthy meals to staff and give free membership to sports club to ensure fitness among employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...club to ensure fitness among employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37065637066 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85291871817 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617760617761 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4134342901 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21307623816 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741411596326 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585727719715 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13298654434 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032494353446 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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