Sports if not played with proper safety, may pose real threat to lives. Some supports that harmfull sports should be stopped, while others feel that it should be left for one to choose. This essay will discuss why perilious sports may be banned but why it should be left to the individuals to choose which sport they prefer to play.
Risky sports destroyed many lives over the years. Sportsman in order to feel the adrenalin rush tends to enjoy such sports where one put their life on risk. Mostly youngsters also attracted by the glamour and fame such sports provide, and they aspire to join without knowing proper safety rules. For examples, Bull fighting race in Canada has took a numerous life in recent years according to a report. In order to stop such practise, government should put a full stop on such activities in the name of sports.
A sportsman should not be restricted from a game if the safety rules are known properly. Proper education and correct safety equipments has to provided to a sportsman so that their life is not into danger. A sportman should not be prevented from choosing his sports profession just because it is harmful. Is it possible for the authorities to stop each and everyone? For example, New Delhi state Chief Minister have organized weekly lessons for safety measures needed for each kind of sports. The lessons are given by veterans in respective sports. To conclude, I feel sports should be choosen without any restriction with adequate knowledge of safety.
Some sports are very dangerous and pose threat to lives if not taken precautions. This essay discussed that why though harmfull sports can be stopped but why it should be left upon a sportman to choose their profession. In my opinion, though some sports are really harmfull but without banning we should allow the sportsman to choose their sports with proper safety education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, while, as to, for example, i feel, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43630579721 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3386238773 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292985659909 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968219532231 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986725457322 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203183927773 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106881840922 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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