Industrialization has improved our lives to the successive rate . The outcomes has led to many adverse benefits and loss . One of its bad impact is it’s production of emissions and toxic which defile the environment . Some
advise that imposing tax on this companies will eradicate this social stigma . Whilst others opine that rewards and subsidy are the best way to control this pollution .
Firstly, implementation of taxation policy on companies those led to desendence of the environment is the best way to curb the problem with a reduce in number of gas emissions and less hazardous natural resources . Secondly , the margin tax rate will encourage companies to perform their duties and responsibilities in an efficient manner . Moreover , this agitate then to contribute less towards the toxic products growth leading to sordid environment .
On the other hand, rather than restrictions of paid charges on the companies there is another solution that will more powerfully aid to significantly to manage this complexity . The government subsidies and incentives will initiates the enterprises to handle with their excessive toxic production in an efficient manner . Furthermore , corporations companies provided with help through rewards and monetary benefits led to initiate new techniques by the innovative companies to turn their waste into resourceful things . As a result , repeating the circle government can recycle this wasteful things in a reasonable price . For instance , some of the countries are on peak rate in turning their trash into valuable use with the reductions and rewards favoured by the high authorities .
To recapitulate , strategy that should be implemented by the government by imposing taxes is less time consuming as well as result in fast response. While in my perspective , for long term benefit and to safeguard future natural resource providing financial assistance to this productive companies will result in technological advancements in waste resources .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56435643564 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16015623197 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0648468378 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11161975554 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391045277757 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375732498733 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692361605356 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331990503122 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.