Some people think that the effective way to reduce industrial pollution is to tax the companies which cause them Others think that there are better ways to do so Discuss both views and give your opinion

Industrialization has improved our lives to the successive rate . The outcomes has led to many adverse benefits and loss . One of its bad impact is it’s production of emissions and toxic which defile the environment . Some
advise that imposing tax on this companies will eradicate this social stigma . Whilst others opine that rewards and subsidy are the best way to control this pollution .

Firstly, implementation of taxation policy on companies those led to desendence of the environment is the best way to curb the problem with a reduce in number of gas emissions and less hazardous natural resources . Secondly , the margin tax rate will encourage companies to perform their duties and responsibilities in an efficient manner . Moreover , this agitate then to contribute less towards the toxic products growth leading to sordid environment .

On the other hand, rather than restrictions of paid charges on the companies there is another solution that will more powerfully aid to significantly to manage this complexity . The government subsidies and incentives will initiates the enterprises to handle with their excessive toxic production in an efficient manner . Furthermore , corporations companies provided with help through rewards and monetary benefits led to initiate new techniques by the innovative companies to turn their waste into resourceful things . As a result , repeating the circle government can recycle this wasteful things in a reasonable price . For instance , some of the countries are on peak rate in turning their trash into valuable use with the reductions and rewards favoured by the high authorities .

To recapitulate , strategy that should be implemented by the government by imposing taxes is less time consuming as well as result in fast response. While in my perspective , for long term benefit and to safeguard future natural resource providing financial assistance to this productive companies will result in technological advancements in waste resources .

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56435643564 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16015623197 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0648468378 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11161975554 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391045277757 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375732498733 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692361605356 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331990503122 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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