Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that environmental issues must be resolved internationally. While there are others who think that it is good to handle country wise. In my opinion, I believe that environment is a global concern and all countries should join hand in hand to deal with these calamities.
On the one hand, climate change has become a major concern for all countries. So all countries should unite and form a community to discuss several issues and share their ideas to tackle with this. Moreover working together will make them to achieve targets easily. For example, recent fire in Australia and amazon forest was not only single country problem but also a major concern for all countries because millions of trees and animals were burned and turned into ashes. 30% of oxygen in the world generates from amazon forest and probability of rare animals going for extinct is very high. However, many developed countries came forward to help them financially and professional to put off the fire. It would be possible only if worked together.
On the other hand, some poor nations have their own problems like water shortage and bulk amount of garbage. It can be solved by the government and individuals of same country but sometime require financial aid from rich countries. For instance, in rural areas of poor countries like Uganda, the drinking water is not available and in few places available but polluted. Many NGOs and rich countries came forward to donate money to install filtration plants to filter water. It would not have been possible without involvement of other countries.
To conclude, in my opinion, all countries should work together any help each other in all possible ways to make the world better place to live in. But one cannot ignore the fact that countries should also work individually to improve their standard of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ssues must be resolved internationally. While there are others who think that it is g...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... share their ideas to tackle with this. Moreover working together will make them to achi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00643086817 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57690512603 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581993569132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8992831018 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5882352941 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171853556689 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553820206426 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049807636875 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120748151225 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081110892225 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.