Doing exercise is important for health is a subject which provokes both the enthusiasm as well as stark opposition, and at the times these two becomes somewhat blurred. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate, which we will discuss here.
On the one hand, those who support exercise is essential for health to say that it provides number of benefits ranging from getting fit and healthy to making their body strong. Besides, they claim that if people do regular exercise, will they able to avoid diseases. Recent surveys suggest that in Australia those who do exercise daily has the average life expectancy over 82.5 years, the government has also made exercise mandatory which seem to bear testimony to this view.
Conversely, however, people who support a balanced diet is important for one’s health point to having a healthy digestive system which attributes to avoid different cardiovascular diseases. Moreover, they think that it is by adopting a healthy lifestyle people know the number of carbs, proteins and fats that are essential for one’s diet.
Overall, it appears to me that the stronger argument is in favour of doing exercise is important for one’s health. After all, living a healthy life is one’s priority to help him move his day to day affairs smoothly.
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
- Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead Discuss both sides and give your opinion 68
- Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ject which provokes both the enthusiasm as well as stark opposition, and at the times thes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, after all, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07906976744 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53987560539 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7569042171 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191103624249 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811263626855 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499238404003 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116905807743 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492753663559 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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