Some people think that giving gifts and presents to friends and family is important to show them that we care. Others think that there are more important ways. Discuss both and give your opinion.
caring about relatives and friends is an indispensable part of people’s lives. While it is of importance to purchase gifts or presents for family members and friends to express feelings, there are better methods to show that a person cares. this is because materialistic people tend to buy gifts, which can be considered as evidence of care. However, I think that emotional support, which does not cost money to give, can show love in a better way.
On the one hand, it is essential to buy gifts for relatives and friends to express caring because people have become more materialistic than before. In other words, if people purchase presents for loved ones, it can be considered as physical proof that they care. For example, on Valentines day, many husbands purchase precious gifts for their wives to express their love. Therefore, due to the materialistic thinking of some people, gifts can be physical evidence of caring and love.
On the other hand, emotional support can be a better and stronger way to express care for relatives and friends. because of the busy lifestyles that people live these days, time has become the most precious resource they have. For this reason, emotional support, which is free to give, might be more difficult than buying gifts. For instance, listening to and looking for solutions for problems that friends have might be harder than purchasing presents for them. emotional support, which is sometimes hard to provide in today's busy life, can express caring for loved ones better than gifts.
In conclusion, in my opinion, whilst getting gifts for relatives and friends is important, there are many other ways to demonstrate care for an individual. Although people that value material items may view presents as proof of affection, providing emotional support can be of more benefit. it can be recommended that people always try to dedicate some of their free time to relatives and friends in order to give emotional support, which might be needed by everybody.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22289156627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62621585664 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46686746988 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7790233867 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.375 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226012139955 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896473055272 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490536197776 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168193771681 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623960432779 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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