You rented a car from car rental company, the air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired.
- Introduce yourself
- Explain the situation
- Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the car which I rented from your company last month. last week, the air condition stopped working and I phoned your company to ask for a repair, but till now nothing has happened.
my name is moustafa ali and I rented a black Mazda 6 car with plate NO ( VTE 6548 ) from your company a month ago. my rental contract No is 245873 and it is a six months contract. During my visit to your office, I was assured that the car is in excellent condition and I will receive immediate support in case of any inconvenience.
last week, while I was traveling from Cairo to Alexandria, the air-condition suddenly stopped working. I called your company’s customer service immediately and I was informed that they will send a technician to repair it within 2 business days. Unfortunately, nothing has been fixed till now and I regret to inform you that both your company’s car and service are below my expectations.
I want you to change this rental car for me within 24 hours because I am not satisfied with it at all. Otherwise, I have no options but to complain about your company at the Chamber of commerce and ask for a full refund of the rental amount of this car.
I believe that this situation deserves your prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
moustafa ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about the car w...
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... I rented from your company last month. last week, the air condition stopped working...
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..., but till now nothing has happened. my name is moustafa ali and I rented a b...
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... till now nothing has happened. my name is moustafa ali and I rented a bla...
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...rented a black Mazda 6 car with plate NO VTE 6548 from your company a month ago....
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...lack Mazda 6 car with plate NO VTE 6548 from your company a month ago. my rental...
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...TE 6548 from your company a month ago. my rental contract No is 245873 and it is ...
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...company a month ago. my rental contract No is 245873 and it is a six months contra...
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...upport in case of any inconvenience. last week, while I was traveling from Ca...
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...t in case of any inconvenience. last week, while I was traveling from Cairo ...
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...d service are below my expectations. I want you to change this rental car for...
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...nd of the rental amount of this car. I believe that this situation deserves y...
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...tuation deserves your prompt action. Yours faithfully, moustafa ali
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...pt action. Yours faithfully, moustafa ali
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7905982906 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77956878487 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7947573258 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4166666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259091987907 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944765399796 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554422949912 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143738935687 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484487164026 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.