Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past decade, the government plays a vital role in our life. few people believe that the ruling party should help needy people such as the jobless and shelter people. In this essay, I will exemplify what are measures should take by the ruling party to improve the life of people.
On the one hand, for the creation of jobs and homeless people, the government can develop the city through companies, industries, and various schemes. if companies are brought to the small cities they will have a chance to improve their needs. For instance, many people from small cities are migrating overseas, in the search of jobs and also to support their family members. In order to develop the life of the youngsters, the government has to built-in industries in the outskirts. For example, car industries may young minds are going other countries to develop their technology in order to develop the self-reliance we need to develop our country.
On the other hand, it is our responsibility to fight for our justice, we have shown our power with our voting banks in order to get down the ruling government. For example, if the ruling government is not proving the needs to people such as jobs to eligible people and also to provide shelter to the poor people it is our duty to let that government down.
To conclude, it is our responsibility to choose the right person who is for the people by the people and it is their duty that they have to help the people in job creation and develop a shelter for the poor people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Few
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...anies, industries, and various schemes. if companies are brought to the small citi...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...anies, industries, and various schemes. if companies are brought to the small citi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67657992565 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51505602995 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460966542751 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.866118698 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220855495937 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958311431711 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101461778496 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161279881969 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603298757722 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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