Over the last two or three decades, the way that business is done has changed dramatically due to major advances in technology. As a result, a growing number of people are now choosing to monitor their business, house by sitting in one place. However, is this development possible, or are there more drawbacks, than advantages? In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of using cctv cameras and try to draw some conclusion.
I will start by looking at the advantages, one of the major plus point of using a camera is the fact control of the theft. Millions of people around the world are facing problems of robbery. Obviously, this is the solution to control crime.
Secondly, working with cctv camera gives you security. For example, if you are doing a business you have to deal with many customers it helps you to monitor the people. this is the way you can keep an eye on the consumers.
On the other hand, you have to deal with a small problem. For instance, a hang problem. suddenly, all they get shut down. clearly, it can be resolved by changing the Hard disk.
Another disadvantage of using the cctv camera is there will be small technical issues. For example, it asks for updates the solution to it is by clicking one key button.
To conclude, there are both positive and negative to using the cctv camera. The fact it controls the theft and security to home, office, business. some people find it quite technical issues it can be resolved. I believe that using cctv cameras is very useful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65799256506 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50157424765 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3035333483 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.65 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.45 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233429987994 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702192976454 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100880344885 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115426471712 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742194318263 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.0946893788 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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