Over the past years, the surrounding way of things changing, The lifestyle of the people, and behavior. The crime rate also increasing. In this essay, I am going to explore the reasons behind the involvement of the younger generation in crime around the world and try to give some conclusions.
Firstly, one of the major part is "poverty", it includes the people involved in many things. such that, Robbery, Kidnapping and Snatching the ornaments. Therfore, it can be put to an end by helping with the basic requirements. such as Food, Shelter, and Clothes.
Secondly, consumption of alcohol and drugs, with more amount of it they will not have self-control upon them. they try to indulge in illegal activities, such that, rapes and Murders. In order, to control these activities the "Law and order" should be enforced on them.
one more reason may be due to "Films", people are living in the other world, they are involving actor behavior and they are involving in "Land Mafia", Therefore the government has to ban this type of movies.
And the last one is due to a psychological disorder, they in crime like rape. A recent, study say that there is a big involvement of youth in these things. In this regard, personal care should be taken like a rehabilitation center and advanced hospitals.
To conclude, they are many reasons for involving of youth in crime such that poverty, alcohol and drugs, movies, psychological problems. But still, I believe that it can be controlled by some amount of effort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08984375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10428436534 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4007256813 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133387805644 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424535000095 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613242292589 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782172396939 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696633314779 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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