Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts, and that this money could be spent elsewhere? To what extent do you agree with this view.
It is irrefutable to say that government is wasting funds on the arts these days. I reckon that this money can be spent in a better and planned way. Government should take palatable steps and systematically use the funds for betterment of the society. In this exposition, I will elucidate what measures can be taken before drawing a rational conclusion.
First and foremost, government should spend money for the benefit of the people as it their hard earned money by way of taxes. Moreover, government should infuse more money towards education and improve healthcare facilities especially in the rural areas. Additionally, government should invest in creating awareness about health problems and lifestyle to increase the life expectancy of the human society.
In contrast to the aforementioned paragraph, spending money on arts could be beneficial to the society in some way. However, spending money for the benefit of the people is necessary and is in more alarming situation. A pragmatic approach should be adopted by allocating funds more towards the society rather than arts.
To recapitulate, spending money towards arts would not be beneficial to individuals and I personally believe it is a waste of money. The money should be spent to improve infrastructure facilities, healthcare and education to make a better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, i reckon, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33490566038 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0434545667 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9625628438 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.25 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308922763227 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119891562028 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06562016925 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192555746314 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031069362073 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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