some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer.Other think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of there opinion do you agree to?
The future possibilities of computer are multifaceted which prompts many people to think that the governments should spend as much money as possible on either developing computer technology or purchasing it. Others, however, Does not agree to the latter view since, contrary to common belief, developing or buying computer technology does not involve a lot of money.
It is a widely felt and accepted fact that computer have made human life easier and more comfortable. To exemplify, many works can works can now be done faster and more efficiently with the help of computer. They are likely to extend their influence to many more fields in the future. The global impact of the Internet cannot be overlooked. All these make it important that the government develops or buys computer technology.
However, The government has other priorities as well. As such, many people are against the government spending money on computer technology. They argue that this money should be well spent on more basic needs. This view is born out of the assumption that astronomically huge sums of money will have to be spent on computer technology, but it is not so.
After analysing the varied aspects of the subject matter,it can be said that since the computer has global influence and is of unlimited benefit to mankind, the governments should necessarily develop or buy computer technology. In spite of its immense benefits, computer technology is not alarmingly expensive, as many people tend to think. As such, the fear that other more basic needs will have to be overlooked it baseless.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'works can'.
Suggestion: works can
...nd more comfortable. To exemplify, many works can works can now be done faster and more efficiently...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...the varied aspects of the subject matter,it can be said that since the computer has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10769230769 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78681383679 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7738410034 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349195765733 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119838453284 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101659511686 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219659951001 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864552137661 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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