Some people think happiness means earning a lot of money, but others think happiness means a balance between job and family. Discuss both views and give opinions.

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Some people think happiness means earning a lot of money, but others think happiness means a balance between job and family. Discuss both views and give opinions.

The simple definition of happiness is when your life fulfills your needs. In other words, happiness comes when you feel satisfied and fulfilled. Happiness is a feeling of contentment, that life is just as it should be. The whole life of a person finding how to get happiness in life and each other find different their experiments. It is highly debatable that happiness is earning a lot of money or balancing work and family. This essay will be analyzed both sides of the argument clearly.
The first argument is happiness from earning a lot of money. There is no denying that the roles of money in our lives. The main advantaged of money can buy the necessities of life like food, clothes, medical facilities. Money is also vital for survival. Particularly, people get quality medical care only when they are able to pay for the services in terms of credit card or cash. If they do not have money, they only dream of going to the doctor and get medicinal treatment. Besides, it is even believed that money can buy happiness. As people with money can buy homes and vehicles of their choice. They can rule the roost in the materialistic world. If they are able to fulfill the wishes, individuals would not feel jealous of others. They are happy and contended as money can fund their lavish style of living.
Moreover, money is also the measure of success in modern society. The wealthier you are, the more people admire you and they aspire to have a life like you. For instance, Jeff Bezos, Bill Gates, Warren Buffett, Mark Zuckerberg or Pham Nhat Vuong are representative examples of a successful life with a lot of money. One more thing, money might not buy happiness and health, but money can make people happy and healthy.
On the other argument, some people are of the opinion that happiness is a balance between work time and time for family. It is a fact that you search how to happier in life on the Internet, all results adviced us to poise job and life. Psychologists explained that work-life balance is important because of many reasons such as you don’t burn out on the job, minimizes health problems, helps you develop and keep relationships or gives you time to learn and create new hobbies. Many people said that their lives have had positive changes when they re-arrange their schedule. It is obvious that most successful men on Forbes shared their efforts from their family. For example, when completed book economics Professor N. Gregory Mankiw wrote this at the end of all of the Section Acknowledgments: “ Finally, I want to mention my three children Catherine, Peter and Nicholas. The contribution of the child is recognized in circumstances where the father spent too much time on research.” Apparently, the professor of Harvard University was very aware of balance. This is definitely a happy family, his children will grow up under the nurturing of a caring wonderful father.
Furthermore, it is true to say that there are many consequences when people cannot control themselves timetable. Because, money does not grow on trees; when you want to earn a lot of money, you will take a lot of time to get it. You have no time to take care of our children or spend time for family, friends and even yourself. There are many pieces of evidence pointed out negative problems that a person who spent almost time for work. Children who were in a state of neglect, have become corrupt and obstinate people. Most of the couples do not have enough time for each other; thus, they broke up. If your body must work in a long time without a day of rest, you will be tired and exhausted fast. Needless to say, you will prime your brain to get rich, just think that you must work more and more but you don’t know why you do that.
To sum up, both sides of the argument regarding the definition of happiness in human lives have strong support. However, after analyzing the two camps it is clear that the idea of happiness from earning a lot of money seems not enough for all of us. I believe that happiness comes when you have enough time for your job and family.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 766, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...Gregory Mankiw wrote this at the end of all of the Section Acknowledgments: ' Finally...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in other words, it is true, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 26.0 7.30460921844 356% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 74.0 24.0651302605 307% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 41.998997996 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3377.0 1615.20841683 209% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 722.0 315.596192385 229% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67728531856 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18363363724 4.20363070211 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54774355655 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 340.0 176.041082164 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470914127424 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1062.9 506.74238477 210% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 41.0 16.0721442886 255% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4855676614 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3658536585 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6097560976 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34146341463 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 32.0 8.67935871743 369% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2369082629 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639537477463 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071104997054 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143506747269 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474541742249 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 78.4519038076 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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