Some people think that international competitive sports such as football bring conflict between people of different age groups and nationalities. Others think sport is helping reach understanding between people and nations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The Impact of international sports event such FIFA has always been a topic of debate. To which, It is believed by a few people that it fuels the tension among different generations and participating nations while others argue that it assist integration between people and countries. In my opinion, although sometimes, as a result of misbehavior or misconduct, it creates bitterness, overall such sports are a great medium to showcase skills, and also enables interaction among nations.
To Begin with, there is a huge difference in taste, especially in sports, based on the age group. Majority of young people follow aggressive sports, which requires intense physical strength and immense dedication, whereas old people enjoy calm and respectful sport, such as Chess, which often result in to heated arguments from both groups. At the same time, due to nature of sport, slight misconduct often fuels bitterness among rival countries, which can be misused by politician as oil to the fire to further their cause. For instance, due to well-known rivalry between France and Portugal in FIFA, not only people from both nations hate each other but also their politician used this opportunity to make fun of each other culture. Thus, aggressive sports do create conflict between people and cultures.
However, worldwide event like FIFA allows to interact with people from different culture and background, which we may have never heard of if it was not for the competition. A healthy competition not only strengthens the bond among individual but also among culture and provides a platform for better relationships. For example, even after long lasting conflict between India and Pakistan, it is the international cricket, which has bonded the citizens of both nations. Furthermore, people can see other sides of the cultures apart from the negative images projected by media and politicians to leverage the political advantages. Thus, international sport events are beneficial for both individual and nation.
In conclusion, competitive sports have both sides, it is up to participants that how resourceful they can make this opportunity. Thus, people should embrace such events with open arms and showcase true sportsmanship to improve the effectiveness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
The Impact of international sports event such FIFA has always been a topic...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interacting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: interacting
...wever, worldwide event like FIFA allows to interact with people from different culture and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38418079096 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90847435678 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.626563076 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.066666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2666666667 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316650712696 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110358255356 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607302362396 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197377548811 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475037400941 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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