Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated.
Discuss both sides & give your opinion.
In this modern era, some people believe that the internet has bridged the gap between each other, whilst others feel that societies are becoming anti-social. I agree that the Internet plays an essential role, but it does lead to minimal contact in your personal life.
Undoubtedly, one of the major reasons as to why the Internet plays a vital role in one's life. Distant families and friends can be reached easily within minutes from any part of the globe. For example, in rural areas, where 80% of the population is illiterate people can utilize the features of voice/video calling in one of the socializing application such as - Whatsapp, or IMO to connect with their loved ones who are away geographically. Similarly, in the corporate part of the world, a businessman cannot be present in multiple locations at the same time, which means that he cannot manage without the internet to perform his tasks. Moreover, he can use the technology to transmit his work to different locations as and when the work demands.
On the other hand, the internet has an adverse effect on people, especially this generation. To begin with, adolescents often prefer staying at home and lying on the couch during their free time due to this they spend hours online with their virtual friends. Also, if they meet up with their friends and families, they are often seen to be busy on their devices. Furthermore, teenagers have more connections online than in their real lives. For example, a recent study held at Harvard University, the students were given a choice to build relations online or in person that resulted in 80% of the students opting for online. As a result, nowadays, people do not socialize much unlike in the past when families and friends used to go for picnics, camping, sporting and so on. Hence, people often fail to realize that they are becoming isolated from the rest of the world. For this reason, people lead a stressful life.
In conclusion, having said that the internet is a technology that cannot be ignored as it has a major impact on our lives by all aspects, but there are certain measures that can always be taken to stay away from the technology as much as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81432360743 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56295143938 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572944297082 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2396718311 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140322662236 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500659953171 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530178420447 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091051869945 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597466854205 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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