Nowadays, internet become more popular thing since many people using them to make a connection, at the same time the majority of people argued that communities is more important, i personally believe that internet is the best way to make a relationship in the world, both views will discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why internet become more popular, the main reason is they can brought people around the world no matter how far the distance is. In addition, since internet has widespread around the world and there are many users had bern connected in this century, for example social media like instagram, facebook and youtube, they have some benefit, for instance we can find new friend, search the newest information and solve the problem by using online group disscusion, that is why internet become more crucial thing in this century for particluar reasons.
On the other hand, some people claim that communities has biggest impact in order to create a harmony life in society, currently, it is evident that in the society people prefer to make a relationship with others by using communication skill, for example in overseas people tend to have good ability in expression because they live in the big city, that is mean every people who lived in overseas must comminicate clearly, with this intention, every people is better to using communication skill because this is highly valued in society.
To conclude , relationship is the best way in order to create a connection to each people, although there are many ways in this case, territory of relationship should driven by internet because particular reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'discuss'
Suggestion: discuss
...ationship in the world, both views will discussed in this essay. On the one hand, ther...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...re popular, the main reason is they can brought people around the world no matter how f...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the biggest'.
Suggestion: has the biggest
...and, some people claim that communities has biggest impact in order to create a harmony lif...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...highly valued in society. To conclude , relationship is the best way in order t...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have driven' or 'drive'?
Suggestion: have driven; drive
... case, territory of relationship should driven by internet because particular reasons....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06204379562 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63680247131 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.098471281 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.4 106.682146367 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259351549064 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138200549361 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863695889763 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151100869207 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876540539294 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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