Some people think it is better for a country's economy for the people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, people think that not saving money they like to spend for a country's economy. this essay will discuss about the benefits of saving by buying assets and deposited in a bank and others spend by a luxurious life.
there is a significant thing to save pennies for their future generations and their safety.Increasingly people invest amount via properties, deposit in an account since there is no safety to have such a huge amount with them. For instance, one of my friend's parents have their amount at home ; thieves noted that and stolen.Now they felt very upset because of this incident;they saved money in different ways. this is not safe to keep valuable money instead we can save those.
Few people believe that they spent a lot for country's better environment. people used to spend via funding and for charity organisations.A recent survey made in india that so many people are spent at orphanages and old age homes. To keep atmosphere nice and economy growth, human being spent their holdings. Although it encourages equality and integrity among a country.
As an end, people decided on how sufficient amount they must and remaining thy would spent in many ways than at savings.this essay would suggest saving money is not useful to anyone ither than their families however its useful for entire world by spending money apart their usage .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6543897202 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638766519824 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9222496867 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367810380222 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151794659212 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118446650316 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232077637716 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647125185199 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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