Some people think that it is better to move to other countries for greater work and life opportunities. Others argue that it is best to stay in their home country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that it is better to move to other countries for greater work and life opportunities. Others argue that it is best to stay in their home country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Everyday, a formidable number of the population immigrate to developed countries in the pursuit of a better lifestyle and there are many who support this outflux wholeheartedly, while others assert that staying in their motherland is a better option. However, both have their own pros and cons. Therefore, before articulating my point of view, both of the views would be discussed.
Examining the former opinion, the key issue the proponents advocate is, that the superiority in the quality of life, is the key deciding factor for a lot of people who immigrate to developed countries. The third world nations are well known for the mismanagement of taxpayers' money and corruption and this plays a vital role for bright talents to look out for. On the other side, the first world nations offer much better accountability to the taxpayers along with health benefits, child education options, better living and working conditions.
On the contrary, the latter puts the moral duty and importance of service to the motherland at the center stage of the argument. Each and every citizen is bound to work towards the betterment of their motherland at all times. The individual’s talent has to be utilised to elevate and strengthen their homeland and the more people stay and serve the country, the better and more prosperous it becomes.
All in all, both parties have reasonable opinions about their causes. However, I feel that the governments should focus and work on the limitations which trigger the brain drain and immigration. The host country is any day better if it enables you to prosper and live happily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...ese views and give your own opinion. Everyday, a formidable number of the population ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, third, well, while, as to, i feel, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03606557377 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75730882355 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2394763275 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486761536624 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151827693486 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145552226719 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296062849256 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.300185003701 0.056905535591 528% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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