Some people think that it is good to start to work at an early age. Others feel that it is better only to study. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is unacceptable that nowadays, people are starting work an early age in this competition world. However, others think that can do work an early age and support themselves for financial wise as well as to get a good exposure. I am the opinion that this matter should be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn.
Firstly, we have a plethora of options to learn it in early age in order to make it our education should be very strong to settle our life in future. Secondly, Many countries populations are very high and people are not getting government jobs due to that Private companies are looking for a high profile curriculum vitae, good knowledge in education system and understanding of analytical skills and reasoning skills so people have to study lot their an early age to make it them as a high profile. For instance, In India, it is very difficult to get the state and central government jobs and every year there 1 million students are coming out from the colleges and looking for a job either government or private.
On the other hand, there are million people under below poverty and very formidable to survey their life in order to that they can not invest more money to study in long life. Also, some of them they are looking for a pocket money during their educational period of time to manage themselves. Some of them are doing part time job an premature of time as well as studies to handle both at same time.
To summarise this, Government has to take an responsibility to identify the below poverty people and provide then free education to lift up their life. Also, people has to study in depth to grow themselves to achieve their life.
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| 2018-08-01 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...rivate. On the other hand, there are million people under below poverty and very for...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pocket money'.
Suggestion: pocket money
...Also, some of them they are looking for a pocket money during their educational period of time...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...a pocket money during their educational period of time to manage themselves. Some of them are ...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...nage themselves. Some of them are doing part time job an premature of time as well as stu...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s. Some of them are doing part time job an premature of time as well as studies to...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... summarise this, Government has to take an responsibility to identify the below po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63907284768 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53094743637 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0152646812 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199426053441 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855200471049 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869227048487 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124184964088 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765309454648 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.