Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say – Why you thought about him/her – Describe the furniture – Suggest a way for him/her to get it.
Dear Ken,
I hope you are doing good. I am writing to you regarding that I am planning to relocate to my native place. Also, I would like to provide my items of furniture to you before when I plan to leave.
First up all, I am very pleased to inform you that I have got the Government job which one is near to my hometown. Normally, It will take 6 kilometers from my native to my new office in order to this I am planning to relocate to next couple of weeks. I do not want to move with my all furniture items. Thus, I would like to share my furniture items with you. I know that you are going to marry soon and however you need to set up your new house. Currently, I have TV Showcase set, One wooden bed, 4 chairs, single table and I have 1 sofa with me what I like to give it to you.
I have a plan that you can come to my house next Saturday morning. We can have a good lunch over here after that we can call for packagers and movers to take my all furniture items and drive back to your house.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
John
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| 2018-05-14 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 56 | view |
| 2018-05-14 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02325581395 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16704258225 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1966261405 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5384615385 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151330377734 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675840375729 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327797899781 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100018429786 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245669493179 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.74 8.71597938144 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.05 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.