Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about both views and give you opinion.
Playing outdoor games is beneficial for health. Two different types of sports that are team sports and individual sports create two different set of opinions. This essay will describe the benefits of both the types of sports and will provide evidence as to why playing in team is better than playing individual.
Team sports like football, cricket are one of the most famous games of the world. Playing in team helps an individual to learn various qualities like discipline, handling responsibilities, team spirit, thinking about well-being of others etc. A person will connect, bond and network with other human beings. This encourages to think as an individual but from various other ideas. Playing in teams helps in creating a healthy competition within the team. It helps to create a feeling of victory not as an individual but as a team.
Playing individual sports on the other hand won’t helps you in understanding the concept of coordination but it will definitely teach you how to be focus for your goals and dreams. While playing individually everything will be solely yours, yours victory, yours failure yours prize and your pride also. It helps an individual to be competitive and understands the other mind and act accordingly.
In my opinion, both types of sports have benefits and less deficits as both will contribute to make a person physically strong and mentally happy. Playing in teams has a little more edge as it will teach an individual how to take everybody with you and win.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thinking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: thinking
...ith other human beings. This encourages to think as an individual but from various other...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ours failure yours prize and your pride also. It helps an individual to be competiti...
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Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun deficits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... both types of sports have benefits and less deficits as both will contribute to mak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, well, while, as to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01195219124 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77790112405 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517928286853 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0627696272 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231667336285 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877090487053 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530262223245 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149584895013 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362445461004 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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