Some people think that it is necessary to save money for life after retirement To what extent do you agree or disagree

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... is intellectual discussion over whether a part of income money should be saved b...
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...rson for retirement life or not. However , I am in favour that a person should sa...
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...on for retirement life or not. However , I am in favour that a person should save...
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... am in favour that a person should save little bit money for his future life and the endor...
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...ey for his future life and the endorsing reasons are being discussed in ahead. ...
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...etirement age person's physical and mental power starts to diminishing, and ...
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...r their betterment of life. Besides this , some sever problems related to health ...
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...rment of life. Besides this , some sever problems related to health embark like ...
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..., some sever problems related to health embark like , heart disease , diabetes ...
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... problems related to health embark like , heart disease , diabetes etc. Further...
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...d to health embark like , heart disease , diabetes etc. Furthermore , to tackle...
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... embark like , heart disease , diabetes etc. Furthermore , to tackle such healt...
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...rk like , heart disease , diabetes etc. Furthermore , to tackle such health issu...
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...rt disease , diabetes etc. Furthermore , to tackle such health issue , they need...
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...urthermore , to tackle such health issue , they need money , if they would have sa...
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...ckle such health issue , they need money , if they would have saved earnings , th...
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...ealth issue , they need money , if they would have saved earnings , than they can spend for h...
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...ey need money , if they would have saved earnings , than they can spend for hea...
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...ney , if they would have saved earnings , than they can spend for healthiness ....
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...f they would have saved earnings , than they can spend for healthiness . Moreov...
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...ved earnings , than they can spend for healthiness . Moreover , in such age som...
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... , than they can spend for healthiness . Moreover , in such age some offspring ...
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...ey can spend for healthiness . Moreover , in such age some offspring leave them ...
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... . Moreover , in such age some offspring leave them on their fate to survive or ...
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... leave them on their fate to survive or do not take care with affection and so ...
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...vive or do not take care with affection and so many instances are in which old p...
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... to live in the oldies home. Secondly , So many schemes have been working for ...
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...n the oldies home. Secondly , So many schemes have been working for employees ...
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... schemes have been working for employees like 'provident fund' which i...
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...s like 'provident fund' which is refunded to them for past life. thoug...
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...ich is refunded to them for past life. though ,some self employee people use money...
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...s refunded to them for past life. though ,some self employee people use money ...
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... refunded to them for past life. though ,some self employee people use money f...
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...ded to them for past life. though ,some self employee people use money for ex...
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...ife. though ,some self employee people use money for exaggerate expenses lik...
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... ,some self employee people use money for exaggerate expenses like purchasin...
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...me self employee people use money for exaggerate expenses like purchasing car...
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...ple use money for exaggerate expenses like purchasing cars, and for glitterin...
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...rate expenses like purchasing cars, and for glittering life style . But , in pa...
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...ing cars, and for glittering life style . But , in past life when actually requ...
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...s, and for glittering life style . But , in past life when actually requirement...
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...ng life style . But , in past life when actually requirement arise than they hav...
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...ally requirement arise than they have to repent . In gist, I can be concluded ...
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...uirement arise than they have to repent . In gist, I can be concluded that sav...
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...uded that saving money is good habit and during enjoying life in present , some f...
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...bit and during enjoying life in present , some foresee should be for future. All...
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...ng life in present , some foresee should be for future. All money is not only for...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236301369863 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.164383561644 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0684931506849 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547945205479 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0513698630137 0.0437548338989 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140410958904 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0513698630137 0.0403226058552 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55586665005 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027397260274 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0479452054795 0.0861772015684 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027397260274 0.021408717616 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102739726027 0.011925033212 86% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1522.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67910447761 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279850746269 0.374742101984 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190298507463 0.28420135186 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138059701493 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0858208955224 0.137316102897 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55586665005 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.9124176046 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3636363636 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2485570997 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.814263465372 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 3.99599198397 1176% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.3934871099 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.58227848101 1.69124875643 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32725538527 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.095110034022 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0382717418299 0.0668466124924 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589944706033 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125304702089 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134823357751 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352104315767 0.0742795772207 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249059867053 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.050738058383 0.0638462369009 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206898155844 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154458044143 0.058150111329 27% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.