Some people think that it is necessary to save money for life after retirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is intellectual discussion over whether a part of income money should be saved by a person for retirement life or not. However , I am in favour that a person should save little bit money for his future life and the endorsing reasons are being discussed in ahead.
Firstly, in retirement age person’s physical and mental power starts to diminishing, and due to this they can not do hard work for earning better for their betterment of life. Besides this , some sever problems related to health embark like , heart disease , diabetes etc. Furthermore , to tackle such health issue , they need money , if they would have saved earnings , than they can spend for healthiness . Moreover , in such age some offspring leave them on their fate to survive or do not take care with affection and so many instances are in which old parents have to live in the oldies home.
Secondly , So many schemes have been working for employees like “provident fund” which is refunded to them for past life. though ,some self employee people use money for exaggerate expenses like purchasing cars, and for glittering life style . But , in past life when actually requirement arise than they have to repent .
In gist, I can be concluded that saving money is good habit and during enjoying life in present , some foresee should be for future. All money is not only for hi-fi life style but it also requires for some critical condition and so, every body should think on it and work on it.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236301369863 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.164383561644 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0684931506849 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547945205479 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0513698630137 0.0437548338989 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140410958904 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0513698630137 0.0403226058552 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55586665005 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027397260274 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0479452054795 0.0861772015684 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.027397260274 0.021408717616 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102739726027 0.011925033212 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1522.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67910447761 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279850746269 0.374742101984 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.190298507463 0.28420135186 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138059701493 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0858208955224 0.137316102897 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55586665005 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 61.9124176046 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3636363636 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2485570997 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.363636364 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 0.814263465372 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 3.99599198397 1176% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 43.3934871099 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.58227848101 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32725538527 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.095110034022 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0382717418299 0.0668466124924 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589944706033 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125304702089 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134823357751 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352104315767 0.0742795772207 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.249059867053 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.050738058383 0.0638462369009 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206898155844 0.228012699653 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154458044143 0.058150111329 27% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.