Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People hold different opinion that some believe that governments should shoulder the responsibility to protect the environment whereas some individuals consider that native should be responsible to preserve their all-around. From my standpoint, it should be joint management by government and residents to take care of nature.
On the one hand, government plays pivotal role to maintain the environment clean and safe. Firstly, the authorities should introduce the legislation in order to mitigate the environmental problems such as air pollution. To illustrate, government should encouraging law that industries move to the countryside rather than staying in cities. As a result, people living in the urban areas protected from harmful fumes, which factories frequently discharge the fumes into the atmosphere.
Secondly, the prominent role of government could play by creating television programs to educate citizens and persuade them to take care of nature. Individuals may endeavor to change their habits which lead to beneficial for the environment.
On the other hand, some persons feel that inhabitants play a significant role to protect their neighborhood. The main air pollution caused by mode of transportation especially by cars, so there should be minimum usage of cars whenever necessary otherwise it should be avoided because rate of congestion in traffic mainly due to number of vehicles which leads to hazardous effect to the environment . It is suggested to use public transport for daily routine so that air pollution can be minimized to some extent. Furthermore, the other main parameter is recycling, by stopping waste plastic entering and contaminating the water sources, people should conserve their drinkable water and inhabitant.
To summarize, it is analyzed that this is collective management by government and natives how to preserve the environment. Hence, government should enforce stringent law and educate the citizens to take care of the nature whereas native should conserve their all-around by using facilities in an effective manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68051118211 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08719649226 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9866403069 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189132227321 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064946683183 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590892778178 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113574575043 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742919119408 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.