Since ancient times it is believed that pets are the best companions of humans. Nevertheless, few people have an opposing view that having pets in their household would jeopardize the lives of their children. I strongly believe that the best way to instill good habits in children is to make them grow up with pets.
There are numerous qualities that can be acquired by keeping the wild in captivity as tamed species. Firstly, pets provide unconditional love with no expectations in return. Secondly, they teach one to be benevolent and sympathetic towards others. Lastly, the change the way one perceives the world and provide a positive environment filled with compassion.
In addition to this, having pets makes one responsible, organized and disciplined. Children learn to nurture the growth of their pets by maintaining timely routine and inculcating disciplinary habits. To add on, they establish an unspeakable bond of friendship with pets.
On the other hand, some parents have a contradictory opinion regarding this issue. They believe that keeping pets is a unhygienic practice and a huge amount of responsibility. In their view children have to cope up with daily life competencies and giving them additive responsibility is unnecessary. Also, it can jeopardize the life of their children if the untamed species are aggressive.
In conclusion,personal opinions vary for having an animal as pet. Wildlife lovers often oppose the idea of keeping the wild in an enclosed environment. However, certain species that are amiable can be adapted in the household.
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- Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples. 56
- Nowadays people have to work for longer hours under stressful conditions Do you agree or disagree with this statement Suggest some ways by which the job conditions can be improved 95
- When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3734939759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12000895766 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598393574297 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9364261489 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7058823529 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170321456491 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526338543655 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322760559167 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936374167406 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296341095442 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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