Some people think that large international sporting events only brings drawbacks, and that it is not worth hosting them. Do you agree or Disagree
people are holding different opinions about the sports match those are being organised in different territories.some people think that these events merely have dire ramifications on the host country.However i personally disagree with this statement due to some solid reasons.
First of all,why arranging sports in countries is not worthless,the main reason behind is that,people with uniwye sports talent can try in these tournaments they cannnot only get famiousness all around the world but also can earn money .for example in the cricket game players are awarded with the abundance of money and they are become eminent among spectators.consequently,they can give an impetence to their and country,s economic growth.
Moreover,hosting events also give Amelioration to the relationship bonding between to countries.hence,countries are come together to show different talent and uniqueness of stratigies through the medium of these sports matches. that is why it is meaningless to say that sporting eventes have barely negative impingments on society and hosting nations.
On the other side,these events also need plenty of money on an international level due to all facilities needed among players and arrangement of chairs and other commodities is also quite difficult .that is why it would better if goverment focus on other events rather than sporting.
In conclution,after the above confabulation,it is elucidate that despite of some minor drawbacks sporting events has more benefits,as it leads to the players prestigiousness and also improve not only their economic condition but their nations too.I personally believe that it would be had better if government oraganize sports tournaments on larger platform
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67441860465 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.61936647953 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.3557021794 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.0 106.682146367 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.0 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.1666666667 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198348525267 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102709839394 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466782484357 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108904431937 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506319640188 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.91 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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