Some people think that large international sporting events only brings drawbacks, and that it is not worth hosting them. Do you agree or Disagree
Over the years, every time a country hosts an international sport event, this has led to unfavorable consequences for the host nation. I completely agree with the opinion that these events don’t contribute in any way to real progress and development.
Whenever a country takes up the responsibility of hosting a world class event such as Olympics or World Cups, the sports authorities and the government bend backwards (put in a lot of extra effort) to accommodate the challenges posed by these events. They build structures and stadiums to host the sporting events, eventually, the constructions remain unused because they don’t serve the purpose anymore and they also damage the local environment because they have used precious natural resources for a short term benefit. This in turn hampers or slows down the growth of the economy because of the excessive spending that was undertaken. For instance, when China hosted the Olympics in the year 2008, millions of Chinese were displaced from their homes and the construction costs led to serious fiscal deficit to the nation’s economy.
During the London Olympics in 2012, many tourists who were present to witness the games tried to stay back in the country long after their tourist visa expired in order to gain employment. This poses a serious threat to the country’s security and can lead to the rise of anti-social elements. Another major concern with undertaking events of such grandeur is that, the authorities involved may indulge in corruption rather than focusing on managing or executing these effects effectively, as observed during the Commonwealth Games conducted in Delhi, India.
In conclusion, the abovementioned reasons substantiate why such events only bring in drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37769784173 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96697180496 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658273381295 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9476307383 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.5 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140923014003 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579620581696 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638233396851 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109508410798 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070921238527 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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