Some people think libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While computers are considered an economical source of getting information, many people choose traditional methods of acquiring data which means to read books in libraries. In my opinion, instead of replacing libraries with computers, both facilities should be available to knowledge seekers at one place which would be less expensive.
People believe that contemporary methods, such as computers should be introduced by ending libraries. It is thought that computer labs are less expensive than maintaining libraries. Computers are more efficient to acquire information because it can store a large size of data. Also, it requires only one soft copy of a book and that can be further copied and transferred as many times as needed. Therefore, a large space to arrange copies of books in shelves is not needed which results into saving of money. In addition, there is not any chance that soft copies of books will tear apart some time, and heavy cost will be incurred in their repair as data in computers is safer than books in racks.
Mostly people, on the other hand, are not computer literate, therefore significance of libraries cannot be overlooked. Elderly people, for example, prefer reading books, magazines in hard form rather on computers because they find reading on a screen pretty difficult. Moreover, if data on a computer gets deleted, it will be almost impossible to recover it. It might cost a hefty amount to avail services of a computer expert. However, repair of a torn book does not involve a large amount.
In my opinion, libraries should upgrade their system by including one or two computer labs. This would allow people to go for their priorities. As a result, an already existed library building can serve both purposes which is more economical than making arrangements for computers by replacing libraries.
To conclude, although computer is an efficient modern technology to read, store and transfer books, a library can fulfill the needs of both young and old generation by having both facilities under one roof. Therefore, replacing libraries with computers is not going to save money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19130434783 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75096133738 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553623188406 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8466522967 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198828767407 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068632530302 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048048862292 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125591357121 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338787397025 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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