It is often believed that from antiquity men have their dominance in several perspectives compare to women. This belief also emphasizes on the competitive behavior of male gender in more natural from the other gender. In my opinion, although nature has provided some privilege to men, however, women are no less and are able to prove themselves in any area, the following essay will elaborate more.
To embark upon men are believed to be the major part of society decision-makers and one who runs the generation, hence, many communities depicts only the fragile nature and emotional factor of women as a homemaker and symbol of beauty. However, history has solid evidence that women have marked their presence with wit, vim, and vigor as well. The mental stability and patience are the most significant factor for success that men often lack, even though men have strength but most of them failed due to this. Women, on the other hand, proved to be more determined and strategic about how to achieve the goals. In a recent article of news by "The Times", around seventy percent of girls get top ranks in the competitive examination and also able to get prestigious positions in the world organizations. Certainly, it is inevitable that the impact of other half population regarding strength and wit.
Furthermore, nowadays there is no field where women are not participating and giving men equal competition, there are several examples like Madam Curi, Rani Laxmibai, Kalpana Chawla and many more. Even, they were exemplary in taking care of family and young ones and parallelly fulfilling their duties fearlessly. In an empirical survey conducted by London's " Oxford University"' ascertained that women are eighty percent more capable of taking politically right decisions and can sixty percent endure more pain than men. Consequently, women are gaining power with knowledge and implementing them in a constructive way for a better world.
To conclude, women are empowered now and with their knowledge and deliberation not only current but future generation can benefit more, so the idea of associating cometitive as an adjective for men only is far from actual facts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a constructive way" with adverb for "constructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...er with knowledge and implementing them in a constructive way for a better world. To conclude, wom...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'facts'.
Suggestion: facts
...s an adjective for men only is far from actual facts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, well, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20903954802 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85385122036 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8806125621 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208927909369 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669547892181 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436519615155 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12885926107 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044935289609 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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