nowadays,people are experiencing a better life than what it was throughout human being history.with the development of innovative technology,the world is becoming increasinly smaller,people from different countries can contact each other much frequently and easily,only with a click on computer.However, technology also has its negative impact on society.I'm going to talk about both of them in the following paragraphes.
firstly,there is no doubt that technology has a pretty positive impact on society.the world has changed a lot due to various inventions.it is beyond our immagination that we can contact a foreign friend even though we never got access to his country before.For example,youths are familiar with the internet applications,like facebook and wechat,they prefer to make friends on line,we can make a video phone call and send our selfies to share our happiness and sorrow.Technology narrows the gap between different continents and gather people from different cultures together.
secondly,technology also does harm to our communities because life is becoming significantly convoluted and unsafe these days.For example,people who live in beijing have o face extreamly serious sand storms due to the air polution caused by
manufactory industry surrouding the city.thus people have to wear masks everyday,which makes them more unconfortable.Moreover,people have to tackle more traffic accidents because of an increasing number of personal cars,which makes individuls easier to get injured.
in conclusion,technology benefits our life,brings more fun to people all over the world.Meanwhile, it also has negative influence on our society.we'd better take advantage of the merits and avoid the shortcomings as many as posible.
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people think the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91304347826 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00931596502 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675889328063 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.917366945 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.0 106.682146367 351% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.25 20.7667163134 305% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188081789048 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109305559624 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343304369288 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10141512572 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441768792371 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 13.0946893788 290% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.85 50.2224549098 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.0 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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