Some people think in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this ultra-modern era, the degree of human independence has become a subject of discussion for people in almost all civilized societies. Some assert human independence is now more than ever before while others argue human dependency on others now as more. Both the notions are in this essay examined well before arriving a plausible verdict.
In doing any works like bookings, paying bills, organizing parties, etc. unlike past, people do not need to depend on others. Also, people are connected online with the world round the clock which enables them to live, study, work and travel solely.
However, in a broader sense, we have become dependent on others in food yielder, network provider, etc. as we are not in their production. Also, abandoning fields like agriculture have made us much to depend on job providers too.
Therefore, despite we have become independent in certain aspects, in others we have become indispensably relying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unlike
... paying bills, organizing parties, etc. unlike past, people do not need to depend on o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21568627451 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67659627659 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692810457516 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3319325928 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341732166769 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107794240842 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761863736792 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177561648682 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570779017425 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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