Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers. Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Technology is enabling the world to move ahead and make the life easier than it was. "Not all that glitters is gold" as the saying goes, in some instances there may be inconvenience caused by advancing technology. In this essay I will discuss on the major views on both sides and will state my opinion in the end.
To begin with, the early days of civilization was laborious in many jobs of construction where there may even several fatalities happened. For example, the building of pyramids had involved 1000s of people with extreme laborious conditions such as pulling and lifting of heavy objects. In the recent years, thanks to the technological advancements, we have high tech cranes that do those dangerous hard jobs for us. Not only the laborious jobs, in terms of soft skills such as memory and design, the technology is a boon to the people working in this fields as it has enabled them to achieve more with ease. For example, the architecture of 1800s was a tedious work due to the paper drafting of all information but today engineers can even simulate things and quote a 100% prediction of a buildings possibility and strength.
On the other side, technology have also created troubles, due to its extensive digitalized methods. For example operating a machine that has impregnated with safety algorithms, makes it hard for a user to start and stop at points due to the excessive unnecessary steps involved. For example, the fork lift in a freight warehouse, due to its safety interlock system, it has become hard for a worker to stop at points where one has to do manual correction or checking of goods. Also there are complaints from workers union that more technology has reduced the number of jobs available in the market as they require the skills of operating hi-tech machines.
To conclude, as century passes, we even evolved the way we think which is very evident in today's kids comparing to the times we were, hence, in my opinion, new technology has improved the lives of workers, but at the same we do see there are problems connected to it, I believe if we could bring better governance systems and skill development oriented education systems we solve those problems and progress towards a better future filled easiness at work.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Also,
...manual correction or checking of goods. Also there are complaints from workers union...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88144329897 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71281343496 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6285742001 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.692307692 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8461538462 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174202603501 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491946253975 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324040162426 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885699172352 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171605493676 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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