Some people think that older employees are more useful to a company. Others believe that in this modern time younger workers are more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some individuals are of that senior workers are more beneficial to an organization, others, however, believe that junior workers are of more value in this contemporary era. I, for one, think that the first view is correct on the basis of some compelling reasons.
On the one hand, supporters of the notion that younger workers are more useful assert that the benefits accruing from them are by no means negligible. To begin with, younger workers are more industrious. Being more active and energetic, they can bring more benefit to their company. Should the mentioned groups be given the same task, chances are younger ones will complete it much sooner. They are also more knowledgeable when it comes to computer literacy. Knowing how to work with Office programs, regulating the social networks and websites, and editing visual effects are the most salient illustrations in this respect.
On the other hand, many put forward the argument that older employees are more useful. First and foremost, they are the linchpin of every company. In fact, they have gained invaluable experience throughout their working life, possibly in conjunction with many struggles. Therefore, these workers have valuable knowledge to draw on. Second, these workers have already developed hands-on skills, including verbal communication, negotiating with potential clients, and dealing with critical conditions. Thus, their existence for any company is not only beneficial, but also a bless in the business.
In conclusion, although younger workers have more energy and are more literate, older employees are of more paramount importance for every company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun put seems to be countable; consider using: 'many puts'.
Suggestion: many puts
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ompany is not only beneficial, but also a bless in the business. In conclusion, althou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4296875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72958285432 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0304651414 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301320488963 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962324688206 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838008121429 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196495305248 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653024056132 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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