There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
◾Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
◾Say what happened the last times you complained
◾Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am James Smith, one of the premium members of your sports club and writing this letter to make a complaint about the situation of the changing rooms.
First and foremost, I need to appreciate it for providing personal coaches and also a full-time specialist in sports injuries, which have been a real blessing. I am afraid to declare, however, that there are two main issues. First, in the bathrooms, the plugholes are always blocked up with hair which is so irritating. Additionally, changing room floor, where we take off and on our clothes, has constantly been slippery with some water on it. Therefore, we are in danger of falling down and hurting ourselves.
Needless to say, I have complained about these conundrums on two occasions, The first time I came to your receptionist, named John if I am not mistaken, and he assured me to resolve them. Another time was a week later when I phoned there, and again I was promised that everything would be taken care of well. Nevertheless, nothing has happened.
I would like to ask you sincerely that in order to resolve the issues, either create an employee scheduling system or hire a part-time worker so that the mentioned areas are cleaned.
Thank you so much,
James Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82488479263 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72165758168 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5109995801 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20926836462 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573472246876 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492139522851 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102878163602 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461601051914 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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