Some people think parents should be forced to attend childcare course to learn how to take care of their children. Do you agree or disagree ?
Some people suppose that parents should be forced to join in parenting courses. From my perspective, while I accept that the government should require parents to take part in parenting courses is true to some extent, I argue that the government should not to force them to join in parenting courses.
It is true that the government should force parents to engage in parenting courses. There are several reasons why I deem that true. Firstly, the advantage of joining in the courses of education parents which is brought for them more experience and skills. It is because of the education of children plays a leading role in controlling from their children. Which helps parents can deal with many issues and learn problem, their children will be better than when they have well-educated. In addition, parenting courses provide parents with a good deal of knowledge. For example: A new parent who has a lack of knowledge, they will meet many difficulties in take care of their children. As their children get high fever, the course of parent will teach them how to take better care children. Thirdly, Parents understand children more such as their feeling and emotional. It is reason why parents build up a close space of generation gap. As a result, Parents have more time to teach them talk and share feelings which is a trust and family strengthened.
Reason why parenting courses are not essential for all parents. Each generation gap has a different personality. That is why male children and female children should not take part in parenting courses. Due to the education of parenting not suitable for their children. Besides, there is no point to take part in that courses. Because the education of children can attain from internet and social media which can be great education for children. Meanwhile, Parents do not have enough time to take part in courses. Because they have to work and other busy schedules. If they take part in the courses, the parent courses will be affected on their work.
In conclusion, from the reasons above, in spite of having many benefits in parenting courses, it depends on their children
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61002341411 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430555555556 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2904098823 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9565217391 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.652173913 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354823925728 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122034397452 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844904164864 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229671898298 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768170000417 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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