Some people think that parents should give their children complete freedom. Others feel that parents should limit their children's freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In our society there are different types of families. These days parents put so much pressure on their kids shoulders and don't care about what they really want.
Firstly, the most common situations is that when parents ignore the talent and the dream of their kids and force them to do something that they don't really enjoy. For example, in one family, mother is an english teacher while father is the director of an highschool, and their son's dream is to be a professional basketball player. The parents job is to be with him, to understand their desires, to help him to achieve his goal. But some parents don't understand how parenting really work, they limit their dreams, and waste their talent to be instead a teacher too, which is unfair. Further more, their son will always ask himself, why he wasn't good enough to convince his parents to let him follow his dream, and in his mind will be forever a question mark. I am not always agree with parents which give their children complete freedom, they have to teach their children how to have trust in them. Moreover parents have to know them to discover what things they like, to understand and to explain them how much their dream cost and let the choice in their kid's hands.
Secondly, some parents act like they don't care at all about the future of their kids but it's not true, they are too busy with their problem at the workplace, and it's pretty understandable when you live in a poor family. I had this problem in my childhood, i was the black sheep of the family. I spent my whole time outside, playing with the rest of the kids from my neighborhood instead of studying and my parents didn't have time to make me understand how life actually is. When i was twelve i receive an offer to leave my parents and to move five hundred kilometers far away from them, to play football for the most important club from our country. Was a dream come true, and even if my parens know who clumsy i am and how lazy i am they let me go, to chase my dream. They had trust in me, i didn't understand by that time how because i was a problem kid. My mom told me that she dont want to think after some years what it would be if she would let me go, she didnt want to reproach her.
To sum up, being a parent is hard, you have to keep a balance between work and your time with the family. You have to understand your kids and be with him when it's hard, and from your experience to lead on the best road from him.
- Some people think that parents should give their children complete freedom. Others feel that parents should limit their children's freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. other say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in the cinema. discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 24.0651302605 345% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32112068966 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19653413082 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478448275862 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.6116905654 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.388888889 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202300351482 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718300759714 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794970244433 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11468622686 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819902402578 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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