Today, our society needs more responsible citizens than any generation ever required. Many people assert that it is the responsibility of parents to groom their children into responsible citizens, however, others think that schools are the place to learn and grow. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and share my opinion.
Talking about the parent's role in the holistic development of the children. Firstly, parents are the ones who bring the child into this world and from a very tender age, child start leaning gestures and language from their parents, hence it will not be wrong to say that parents are children's first teacher. Secondly, the child spends most of the time with their family, and hence, their personality and thought process get influenced by their home environment a lot.
On the other side of the argument, schools also play a vital role in the growth of their students. Primarily, schools provide an environment of learning and growth. In schools, students not even learn from their textbooks, they also learn to interact with their mates and grow socially. Secondly, a well-trained and intelligent teacher at schools plays an important role in shaping the career of students. A professional teacher can understand the weakness and strengths of their student and can provide guidance to improve. It has been observed that the techers can prove to be a role model in the student's life.
To conclude, children can grow into responsible members of society through the joint venture of parents and schools. In my opinion, the first stepping stone in the grooming of the child is always kept by parents and the schools help to provide structured training and activities which further enhance the character of the student.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study There are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties Discuss the advantag 56
- These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study There are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties Discuss the advantag 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...share my opinion. Talking about the parents role in the holistic development of the...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ers can prove to be a role model in the students life. To conclude, children can gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10416666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64632541356 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559027777778 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9052741744 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20754974761 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745106369551 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594444749801 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135721358966 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671729825056 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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