Some people think that people should choose their job based on income
in order to provide security for their family.
Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job?
What other factors should be considered?
For the majority of people, salary is the criteria for selecting a job to secure future of their families. This essay is an attempt to discuss if wages offered plays a key role while making decisions for one's professional carrier, with my own opinion and examples. Further, I will try to highlight some of the selection criteria one should keep in mind.
To begin with, in this time of inflation where its difficult for a person to withstand family day to day expenses ranging from food, housing, and education to name few of them; therefore, selecting a job with high wages will certainly become an important factor. This will not only fulfill the basic requirements of the family but at the same time could help to raise the standard of living, which is again considered as an important requirement of the young generation. These days, children not only need food they need pizza also, likewise there are expenses choices of children which force their parents to give more importance to salary offered.
Although, money is need of the hour, however, one should think about other aspects of the work before selecting the job. Type of profile offered is one of such factor, which cannot be ignored. For instance, it has been observed that people who comprise the profile over the perks offered feel more frustrated, irritated and exhausted, which compel them to switch job again and again. This attitude of not maintaining long relationships with one company affects the experience of the person and thus finds difficult to search job at later stages. Secondly, the number of working hours entitled to the job could also make the difference. Let's take an example of a person working on high profile position has to provide round the clock services to the client all throughout the year even at holidays, which will certainly affect his personal life and this high wages will not help to nurture the sentiments of family members, which is really important for healthy relationships. This is further results in depression and other psychological-related issues.
In conclusion, it can be worth to mention that though the high figure salary is need of the hour, however, a combination of other factors will lead to better professional as well as personal future.
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Suggestion: some
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Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98157894737 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7094415305 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563157894737 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.105309788 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.214285714 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210130398857 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732335248851 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462698121245 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118804644442 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362825414632 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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