It is true that job seekers tend to base their decision upon salary level to ensure financial support not only for themselves but also for their loved ones. Even though I accept the fact that salary plays a pivotal role in people's job selection process, there are other reasons which may affect their choices.
There are a variety of reasons why people may consider wages as their priority when choosing a job. Firstly, if he or she has a higher income, a better standard of living would be afforded. This would mean a more spacious accommodation for the family, a newer car to travel and better education for his or her children. Secondly, while many people may relate money with materialistic value, it would play as a spiritual and motivational factor as well in stimulating people to achieve their goals. For example, if the manager promises a new sale employee a high incentive based on his or her performance, this beneficial return would drive him/her to work hard towards accomplishing assigned tasks.
However, some people would evaluate their job decisions based on other factors, not money alone. The first one is the passion, which offers people the enjoyment and satisfaction during their work. Many people quit their prospects in the finance industry in order to pursue their dreams as performing artists. Additionally, some will go extra miles to contribute towards society. For example, Dr.Kurt has built several schools to support children under poverty in Vietnam and become an English teacher there, while he would have enjoyed his easy life if he had chosen to work for Swiss Embassy.
In conclusion, while the majority of the population would go for jobs with high wages because of theirs tremendous perks, there are other elements including passion and social contribution may drive an individual to pick his or her job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kurt
...ribute towards society. For example, Dr.Kurt has built several schools to support ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0325732899 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59916484375 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1101606406 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317885749473 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120641084586 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826420783383 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192489335544 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326029715416 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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