Some people think that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. DO you agree or disagree.
It is often argued that corporations should pay the same remuneration to labors and those who hold professional degrees. This essay disagrees with this view and believes that such a trend will result in companies' negative growth and make people reluctant to study.
The primary reason why I disagree with this opinion is that if employees of all levels are compensated equally, organizations will end up paying more salary and in turn reduce their profit margin. This will happen because a company mostly has around 80% of workers and if every employee’s pay is increased, the company’s cost will have a tremendous increase and will reduce their profits. For instance, the company where I work has 2500 employees and from them, high level positions are only around 150. Hence, if they increase the pay of every employee, there won't be anything left for the company to earn.
Secondly, if such a trend prevails, youngsters will feel that it is useless to complete higher education as one can earn enough doing menial jobs. Those how are highly qualified are the ones who wanted to live a life with a better earning job. There this scenario will completely change if employees start paying everyone the same salary. For instance, my friend Manish is completing his P.H.D in science because he wants a high paying job and help his family become economically sound. If he had a choice to earn the same salary without his education, he would not have enrolled for a doctorate.
In conclusion, paying the same salary to employees of all categories is not a viable option as it can lead to demotivation to study and result in a decline in the growth of corporates.
- Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local 73
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90526315789 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71441553713 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8377636853 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11483816043 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426153073655 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034675480377 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063944675879 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447929453933 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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