Enhancing ones personality is very important in today's senario. Few individual has the thought procces to work on their intellectual personality by particepating in group activities.
The upcoming paragraph will highlight my view in the agreement of this notion.
To begin with, there are various reasons to involve in group for the betterment of growth.Firstly, taking part in team can give proper feedback on individuals mistake so that they can improve themself in the particular area.They can easily overcome with all weakness and can perform great whenever required. Secondly, involving in group and make friends and be social person can also make them introword so that they can be frea less in front of gadering in results they will be more confident in public.
Furthermore, in these type of activites person can learn new thing and they adopt as that may increase there interlectual quality can learn lot of things which are new for them and can not be thought in any of the instution.In addition to this group can give so many ideas in tearm of carrear and how to achive gola a be a succefull person in life. They also inspire you towards positivity and you can be abmition in upcoming future.
To conclude.l, there are servival benefilts of take part in group activities to improve interlectual skill in person can overcome with all weakness and can you social person with lost of ideas ho how to build career and can be ambition in life.
- Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities To what extent do you agree Use specific details and examples to explain your view 55
- You are planning to go to a music concert in your town and would like a friend to accompany you Write a letter to invite your friend to the concert you are planning to go to In your letter say what the content of the music concert is where and when is the 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91093117409 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77405054439 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.799611632 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.625 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.875 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108077365863 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619695981001 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387416055407 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075222957732 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386712955399 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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