Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree ?
As the most of the people beliefs, the majority cause of crime commitment is destitution. In my opinion, however, poor people motivate to sin more than others; I believe that other factors such as illiteracy and parent or friends influence would be as important as poverty.
Lack of education is one of the crucial parameters which leads a person to commit an offence. In fact, People are taught how to have good manner and how to decide between right or wrong ways in schools. So, analphabet person who drops out of school would never know about the ultimate result of his/her wrongdoing because he/she do not learn about moral behavior.
Undoubtedly, parents and friends have the most significant impact on a person beliefs or even characteristics. As a matter of fact, youth who have criminal friends or parents, easily attract to delinquency because of the peer pressure or perhaps wrong pattern. so, the friends or parents effect should not underestimate.
On the other hand, to some extent, I agree with that, the poverty affected the human beings senses, but it is related to person's decision to be a criminal or not. For example, when a needy person was starving, he/she would never attend to good or bad moral in that kind of situation but, he/she might choose to plan a shop robbery or request for help and food or in better situation ask for a job with the minimum salary.
In conclusion, although, penury perhaps would be a cause of committing a minor or major offence, some other important factor such as illiteracy and parents or friends effects would have the same level of importance as poverty.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275974025974 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.11038961039 0.155533422707 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0941558441558 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0519480519481 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.012987012987 0.0437548338989 30% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.126623376623 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.00974025974026 0.0403226058552 24% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.64880118936 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324675324675 0.0326793684256 99% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0876623376623 0.0861772015684 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0227272727273 0.021408717616 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194805194805 0.011925033212 163% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1622.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85559566787 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364620938628 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263537906137 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15523465704 0.203846283523 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.086642599278 0.137316102897 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64880118936 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.7464881107 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1818181818 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2227129007 49.517814964 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.454545455 127.492653851 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.814263465372 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 51.5356087955 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.35185185185 1.69124875643 139% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223603160054 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0897435878739 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0556015813731 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.655853838424 0.534860350844 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146288387398 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103717969711 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535730168021 0.0742795772207 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.216001023342 0.324371583561 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0262546849644 0.0638462369009 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138406126959 0.228012699653 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398687835728 0.058150111329 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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