When a person commits a crime he or she is not supposed to be around innocent persons. However most people believe that a criminal should undergo a job training and be educated rather than going to the prison for the crime they commit. I totally disagree with this take.
In our world today, it is absolutely right to put away criminals and put them in a space where they will undergo sanitization. Meanwhile, as they are in this space called prison it will keep them from committing more crimes and enable a safe place for the innocent citizens. When a criminal commits a crime for instance, it is the innocent individuals that suffers it, some of them go as for as getting other people’s children in their hold to learn these immoral act, which is totally absorbed.
Prison sentence is used in dealing with criminals by the government to control immoral behaviors of anyone who commits a crime. For mental stability it is important for government to make sure that every convict gets a certain level of Eduction and job training. In our world today, education is very essential for every human. Educating a prisoner will help them a lot, especially in their social activities in the outside word. Furthermore, if job trainings are made available for them as they are in the prison it will help them start and new life as fast as possible when they finally get out. And it will definitely help organize their lives, behaviors, social activities and give them good platform for public relations.
Conclusively, to avoid environmental displacement and tremendous growth in crime, when you find any offender around your neighborhood report to the police so that such person will be arrested, put away and be corrected. The word will be a better place like that. However to avoid going to the prison stay away from crime.
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
- Write a letter to your manager about a computer system problem that you have encountered and say Describe the problem How it is affecting your work What needs to be done about it 78
- You missed an important meeting at work Write a letter to your manager In the letter Apologize for not going Explain why you were not there Say how you will make up for it 73
- Write a letter to your friend to recommend a book to read that you have read You should include Describe the book How it can help him her Where can he get it from 73
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...supposed to be around innocent persons. However most people believe that a criminal sho...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... word will be a better place like that. However to avoid going to the prison stay away ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82802547771 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63618100326 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541401273885 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5268103412 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202000849252 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736359805729 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715127964424 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134247317118 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075169542863 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.