The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action

Dear Sir

I'm writing this letter to request your action towards the environmental pollution on my street. This is really affecting residents in the neighborhood and the situation gets worse by the day.

The main problem we are facing is improper disposal of waste. We just have only one refuse bin on my street and it gets filled up very fast. Most times the truck that comes to empty the refuse bin daily does not show up and it makes some residents drop their trash recklessly on the road.

This situation makes it very unhealthy for people due to the odour from the refuse bin. The refuse bin is not emptied on a daily basis and this tends to breed mosquitoes which then transmits malaria to anyone that is bitten.

I'm suggesting that you increase your staff in charge of disposing the refuse bin so they will always empty the refuse bin daily and also make available more waste bins to accommodate the wastes of the neighborhood to avoid having littered waste on the streets.

I'll be grateful if you treat my request as a matter of urgency.

Yours faithfully
Michael Grant

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...daily does not show up and it makes some residents drop their trash recklessly on...
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...p their trash recklessly on the road. ...
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...smits malaria to anyone that is bitten. ...
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...having littered waste on the streets. ...
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...reat my request as a matter of urgency. ...
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... Yours faithfully Michael Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71354166667 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40098517649 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.5477222243 44.8134815571 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197979045517 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818661925739 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547719936214 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796932224294 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747393812106 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.