Dear Sir,
I'm writing this letter to inform you that it would not be possible for me to take the job this summer. This is as a result of unforseen circumstances.
So, the National Youth Service Corps call-up letter for this year 2022 is out. I am among the first set which is entitled "Batch A". I'll be traveling to the orientation camp on the 4th of may 2022 and will be there for three weeks. This exercise will continue after the camping and this will be for a period of 11 months and one week; the participants would be posted to various primary places of assignment also known as their "PPA"
I'm sorry for the inconvenience this impromptu circumstance must have caused your workplace. Although I never saw it coming. Please forgive me!
Lastly, next summer is also another opportunity to work with you. I'd reach out to your office when I'm done with my NYSC, so expect to hear from me by that time.
I hope to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Im writing this letter to inform you tha...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Sir, Im writing this letter to inform you that ...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... which is entitled 'Batch A'. Ill be traveling to the orientation camp on...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... also known as their 'PPA' Im sorry for the inconvenience this improm...
^^
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stance must have caused your workplace. Although I never saw it coming. Please forgive m...
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Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...o another opportunity to work with you. Id reach out to your office when Im done w...
^^
Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'reaches'.
Suggestion: reaches
...nother opportunity to work with you. Id reach out to your office when Im done with my...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...h you. Id reach out to your office when Im done with my NYSC, so expect to hear fr...
^^
Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u at the earliest. Yours faithfully, Adam Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, lastly, may, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68156424581 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6559061111 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68156424581 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5355089353 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159801590313 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590004982872 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716566291711 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982163192066 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637850464302 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.