Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Health is always be a debatable issue all over the decades. Some people agree that there should be persistent involvement in implementing the regulations in food quality. However, others suppose it is an individual's option to be aware about his/her health conditions. Here, I intend to put forth my arguments by discussing both the views.
On the one hand, as the globalization and industrialization has taken place, there are enormous options available in the market to eat variety of food. Recent studies shows, due to hectic life style, majority of people are now indulged in having fast food in their daily diets. As a result, the fitness and health rate is keep on deteriorating gradually. So, to counter this issue, government put forward to make some effective rule and regulations regarding the nutrients level in the contents of food.By doing that, people will not suffer from the chronic diseases caused by the inhaling the contaminated food and young ones will not face the obesity.
On the other hand, various people believe that eating the food is one's sole choice and onus. They suggest that regulating the strict laws in this field will be taken as infringement of common people's rights. According to them, in this era, everybody is aware about what they eat and the food intake by them will be what effect on them in the future. Thus, it is not ethical to incorporate any laws to regulate the food.
In conclusion, as we are aware that the eat eaten by us is not as much good quality due to various environmental and human interference so authorities ought to take sufficient steps towards this matter considering the well being of every human's choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
Health is always be a debatable issue all over the decades....
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...nutrients level in the contents of food.By doing that, people will not suffer from...
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Line 13, column 37, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... In conclusion, as we are aware that the eat eaten by us is not as much good quality...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92957746479 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75458356363 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1284714291 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204718786293 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721454397461 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303691542395 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115827411587 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582617499629 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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